Days Of Her Life
She stumbles along on the twilight streetpinches her pennies in small dingy shopsmends her clothes with tiny neat linessleeps all alone in a bed cold as stoneLeaving him wasthe hardest thingshe ever...
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Quote:She has come a long waynow has noplace to goexcept towardsthe sign that reads"Survivors."Oh my, this is sucha powerful and heartreaching piece Sylvia!!A difficult topic to write,and you've done...
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I truly love this wonderful character write, you can feel the person thru your writing, and the ending is perfect... Bravo Sylvia, always pleasure to read you... Bri~
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Sylvia, this just rips at my heart. And this....Quote:her shoes are worn threadbarejust like her heartIs just amazing. (((hugs)))Poems For The Heart and Soul Please Drop by the Poetry Factory
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Hi Sylvia,A very compelling and moving read.Life is excruciatingly tough for some.Best wishes,Paul
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I apoligize for not responding earlier.This is sad but see word at end.It's hard to survive."Survivors."I am currently under a thunderstorm warning, issued by NOAH.sola
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Thank you, Sylvia, for this tribute. I know many a woman that has taken this route, my mother for one. She sewed in a gamrnent factory instead of baking bread.I love you,NewellTruth doth see it...
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This is such a moving and heart touching write Sylvia...the part about the bread reminds me of a girl I saw on a movie "Million Dollar Baby" with Hillary Swank about a boxer...she was a waitress who...
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Twilight,Thank you so much for the award and the understandingwords about this poem. It is the way many women haveto go and life is hard for them. hugs, SylviaBrian,Thank you for reading this and...
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Some very beautiful imagery highlighting the solitary nature of this brave lady who had the courage to break free no matter what the cost. Robert Davidson.(Robertodavo)
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Hi Robert,Thanks for your time and your generous comment. It isgood to know that some men know this poem is not theway life should be spent. Sylvia
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